Good job! Very expressive eyes and face! I would muffle the white a bit. And he gave more contrast on the figure. In the camera, try to choose the exposure calculation for the center point. Then the camera would calculate the exposure on a white color on the chest. White would not have smoothed out so much.
Thank you Sergey ! Really appreciated your kind comment. It’s obvious I did n’t use correctly the features of the camera, because I focused to the face. The white collar should not be came out so bright.